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everyday
Contributed by
jjones12
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Wednesday, 6th July 2005 @ 05:11:20 PM in AEST
Topic:
FamilyPoems
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everyday i tell you,
i love you,
and you don't answer,
everyday I ask you,
how are you feeling,
and you don't answer,
everyday i ask you,
do you need something,
and you don't answer,
everyday i ask you,
will you ever get better,
you don't answer,
today i ask you,
do you love me...
you looked at me,
and pointed to a peice of paper and penncil,
i gave it to you,
and you wrote,
there are know words to discibe how much i love you,
now your gone ,
but i still have that peice of paper,
i will never forget that day,
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jjones12
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2005-07-06 17:11:20]
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Re: everyday
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by deathdrop on
Wednesday, 6th July 2005 @ 05:27:35 PM AEST
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very sad and emotional...
my mum is dying of cancer, but she is nothing like as ill as the person in this... my heart goes out to you.
and as long as you have that bit of paper, that person will always be with you, never forget that! |
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Re: everyday
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by springchic1979 on
Wednesday, 6th July 2005 @ 07:15:37 PM AEST
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Very emotional poem. A wonderful piece to read!
Yvonne |
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Re: everyday
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by jstrickland on
Wednesday, 6th July 2005 @ 08:10:13 PM AEST
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| VERY HEART FELT POEM I THINK IT IS VERY GOOD MEMORYS ARE SOMETHING WE CAN NEVER FORGET AND WE MUST HOLD ON TO THESE FOR EVER! |
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Re: everyday
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by pUnKa_RaCh on
Wednesday, 6th July 2005 @ 08:57:03 PM AEST
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Oh wat a sad write. I can relate to this very much as I have lost a family member too.
It does hurt when the most when you know they are gone and arent there to answer you.
Beautiful, touching words though. Very heartfelt.
May the soul you miss Rest in Peace.
Hope to you. |
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Re: everyday
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by RoxyGirl on
Friday, 15th July 2005 @ 01:39:23 AM AEST
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I loved this poem it was very well writen and I think your good poem.
LOVE ALWAYS YOUR FRIEND
ROXYGIRL |
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