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Taking Life by the Reigns
Contributed by
Benny14
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Wednesday, 6th July 2005 @ 11:56:06 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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I have decided to take life by the reigns
Because the horses have strayed for too long
But then again, Ive never taken my own advice
Laying back like an embarrassed child, I simply say and do the right things
Somehow after you, right seems wrong and impulsive infallible
Quarter life gone and nothing to show
I fall upwards towards a sky not ready to collect
With beliefs not my own but of those before me
My morality is their heirloom
Like an intangible hand-me-down
It is time for me to move from their shadow
And I will start with you, my first independent act
The old trees have been burnt to make room for the new
Will you take me as such?
This is the first time I can offer all that I am
And I hope that it will be the last
My horses, led too long by others are given now to me
And they arrive in good hands
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Benny14
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2005-07-06 23:56:06]
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Re: Taking Life by the Reigns
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by emystar on
Tuesday, 31st January 2006 @ 02:03:57 AM AEST
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Your writng speaks direct to the heart-n-soul.
I guess u mustta wrote this one for me. big smiles, U reach into the abyss and make life sensible to anyone that reads.
Jus wat I needed to feel and see at this moment.
Excelent writer, u r a professional in the deepest meaning of the word.
huggs,
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