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Day-by-Day Struggle
Contributed by
sprinter27
on
Thursday, 7th July 2005 @ 12:24:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
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Living day-by-day
Is painful in everyway
Struggling through life
Is a hard strife
I want to let go,
Forget all I know
I want to become numb to this,
Not feel any of it
Want to give up everyday
Want to push all of it away
I want to die,
Say goodbye
And let go of it all,
Just let go and fall
Want to grab the gun,
Say goodbye to the sun
Want to pick up the knife,
End this long-lasting strife
I am tired of living like this
I want to hit the bottom of this abyss,
This never-ending, hard-struggling life
I want to give up and fight no more in the strife
Im tired of living this day-by-day,
Taking the pain everyday in everyway
I hate living in this life
Where everything is in the strife
That we have to fight
Just to earn the right
To live and be
I just want to end me
Stop fighting,
Stop trying
Give up all of it
Stop living like this
Want to let go of it all,
Just let go and fall
Living day-by-day
Is painful in everyway
Struggling through life
Is a hard strife
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2005-07-07 12:24:00]
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Re: Day-by-Day Struggle
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by spazz911 on
Thursday, 7th July 2005 @ 02:42:01 PM AEST
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I DONT UNDERSTAND
i have no idea y u r feeling like this, so much pain and hurt, i dont know wat causes it, u really need to tell us y u r like that, or we wont ever have a clue
open up
kc
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Re: Day-by-Day Struggle
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by Bones on
Saturday, 9th July 2005 @ 01:05:35 PM AEST
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Very nice peom. You put alot of emotion into this I can tell. 5/5
-Bones
P.S.
Always remember this:
Dark is just before dawn. And never let it go. |
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Re: Day-by-Day Struggle
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by mysticaldancer on
Wednesday, 1st March 2006 @ 02:19:14 PM AEST
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| wow! |
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