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want to hear
Contributed by
jjones12
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Thursday, 7th July 2005 @ 02:19:34 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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i want to hear,
that you care,
i want to hear,
that you'll never leave,
i want to hear that,
you want to be with me,
i guess i want to hear that,
i'm worth something,
i guess i want to hear,
that somebody's there for me,
i guess i want to hear that,
somebody will hear me,
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Re: want to hear
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by DarkFairyLove on
Thursday, 7th July 2005 @ 02:32:52 PM AEST
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| to be honest with you i dont see where your poem is going...It seems to open ended and needs either a resolution or a closing..This is not to be mean but to be honest from another writers point of view |
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Re: want to hear
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by spazz911 on
Thursday, 7th July 2005 @ 03:32:51 PM AEST
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i disagree w/ the previous comment i think this has its own ending, it states wat u want, its the rest rolled into one, i like it bc i can really relate, i think everyone can, and althought the statement was open it was honest and i like it
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