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farewell to the essence
Contributed by
hardrocker15198916
on
Thursday, 7th July 2005 @ 06:24:20 PM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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break off chunks of my essence
scatter at the thought of my presence
i seek destruction and vengence
fade away and die
tear me into pieces
im lost to the air
rip away slowly
i will never care
just seek the human
that was never there
that never cared
thoughts tangeled in her hair
but dont weep for her
dont weep for me
crying tears that
remain unseen
save the day
in one new way
break the spell
and say farewell
Copyright ©
hardrocker15198916
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2005-07-07 18:24:20]
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Re: farewell to the essence
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by Unbreakable on
Thursday, 7th July 2005 @ 07:52:10 PM AEST
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I like this poem. I like that your wording isn't flowery, it's real. And the words you choose get the message of your poem across. Great write, keep it up..
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Re: farewell to the essence
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by em1842 on
Thursday, 2nd March 2006 @ 04:42:38 AM AEST
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| this poem sounds like it would make really good lyrics maybe? |
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Re: farewell to the essence
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by Honey56 on
Saturday, 2nd September 2006 @ 12:04:47 PM AEST
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Very beautiful write....Your words was well placed..Sad but good never the less..
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