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The Fish
Contributed by
olddarkme
on
Thursday, 9th January 2003 @ 08:20:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
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Across the lake I started to look and with
nervous hope I baited my hook. A ripple I
spotted gave me a sign and in that direction
I cast out my line.
I waited for news with a smirk and great
zeal and was rewarded for it with a tug on
my reel. The fish flashed his size, "A
five footer I thought. He'd look great on
my wall if he ended up caught."
So I played with the fish as day passed into
night but he wouldn't go down no matter how
tough the fight. Finally I left it where it
had been. The fish won this round but he'd
see me again.
Copyright ©
olddarkme
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2003-01-09 08:20:00]
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Re: The Fish
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by Fwog on
Thursday, 9th January 2003 @ 09:05:05 AM AEST
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Yeah the fish,
This is such an enjoyable read, you had me reeled in.
A good write I enjoyed the experience |
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Re: The Fish
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by SmokinJoeEvil on
Thursday, 9th January 2003 @ 09:25:20 AM AEST
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| This poem has a great rhyme-scheme, yet you've written it out of line/stanza form. Which actually adds to the feeling of this being a story as well. Interesting approach, nice poem. |
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Re: The Fish
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by ladyfawn on
Thursday, 9th January 2003 @ 04:33:49 PM AEST
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Dear Olddarkme @-<<
*Ahh-hum* Don't you fishermen always have a five footer??? Ha! Maybe it was a log!
Great Write:)
Always Nessa |
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