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This Worlds One True Treasure
Contributed by
Doriens_Picture
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Thursday, 7th July 2005 @ 07:55:54 PM in AEST
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I believe with you I will never break
With you I can be as open as the sea
I have nothing to hide from you
Not even the tears I cry when I miss you
You see in me, something no one else could
You have also seen something I never show
Something no one else could see
You say no one ever bothered to look
As deeply as you did and do so everyday
And when you do you find
The best and worst of me
And nothing changes between us
We will never stop growing closer
I will never stop loving you
You have all my trust, you have faith in me
You let me be the best I can be
With out you I could not be anything
Beautiful to anyone, nothing special in any way
With out you I would not be alive today
You really are my angel my savior
You say I am your AngeL
But in truth you gave me my wings
And with you I feel more than happy and wealthy
You are now and will always be
This worlds one true treasure
And I hope that you will always be mine
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Re: This Worlds One True Treasure
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by Gothchyk on
Thursday, 7th July 2005 @ 09:08:57 PM AEST
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| awe, such a beautiful write, very heartfelt. |
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Re: This Worlds One True Treasure
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by pUnKa_RaCh on
Thursday, 7th July 2005 @ 09:27:30 PM AEST
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Lovely read John.
Filled with such emotion, straight from your loving heart. Well done, I'm sure she has looked at you and the seen the best. ;)
Dont doubt urself. |
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Re: This Worlds One True Treasure
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by bgj on
Thursday, 7th July 2005 @ 09:51:43 PM AEST
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Very nice! Good job.
bgj |
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Re: This Worlds One True Treasure
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by emystar on
Friday, 8th July 2005 @ 02:55:32 AM AEST
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wow!!!
Reaches out and grabs ya by the chest and proves true luv still exist on this planet.
A masterpeice as all your luvly writes to your girl.
big smiles,
emy |
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