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Wherever Thorns May Grow
Contributed by
ForeverAlone
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Thursday, 7th July 2005 @ 07:58:07 PM in AEST
Topic:
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Wherever Thorns May Grow
Garden of evil thriving beyond the silk covered sky,
and blood drenched clouds.
Deceit injected soil of the perfect heavens so high,
and burning hell underground.
Seeds planted between each row of sewn shut eyes,
and staple sealed mouths,
Watered by fallen angels as they intensely cry,
and mourn for walking the forsaken routes.
Crops saturated in blood to grow the darkest rose,
and blood's trickling-sharpest thorns.
Fashioned for death with a deep morbid glow,
and a naturally undying scorn.
Skin stretched tight around the faces of the rows,
and the death being reborn.
Heaven or Hell, where ever these thorns shall grow,
. . .
Hues of deathly beauty will be adorned,
and the dams of blood will constantly flow.
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ForeverAlone
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Re: Wherever Thorns May Grow
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by Unbreakable on
Thursday, 7th July 2005 @ 08:07:29 PM AEST
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Wow..this is a great write, even if it is kind of morbid. Your description and imagery is perfect. And even though your lines dont rhyme perfectly everything flows so well. Great job, keep it up...
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Re: Wherever Thorns May Grow
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 7th July 2005 @ 08:28:40 PM AEST
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amazing writing
your wisdom is
top notch and it
shines through
here in this.
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Re: Wherever Thorns May Grow
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by Essentially9 on
Thursday, 7th July 2005 @ 09:47:18 PM AEST
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| heaven looks nice, doesnt it? wherever thorns may grow, hopefully it isnt in your side. as i told you, this was boring to me, because this was finally too descriptive to interest me, sure you had excellent verses, but if i dont see the image, than i dont want to bother with someone trying to make me see it. ive seen your images before, but with this, i did not. |
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Re: Wherever Thorns May Grow
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by pUnKa_RaCh on
Thursday, 7th July 2005 @ 09:57:20 PM AEST
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I like the rhyming style of this one... You've done it so well.
Beautiful, dark and a captivating piece.
This one's special Clark.
Bravo |
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Re: Wherever Thorns May Grow
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by Vampirequeen on
Friday, 8th July 2005 @ 10:39:04 AM AEST
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oooooooooo i like this one alot.
awsome job on this one. |
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Re: Wherever Thorns May Grow
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by hauntedscorp on
Friday, 8th July 2005 @ 10:46:29 AM AEST
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I really like this Clark...Your wording was excellent...What an amazing visual I had reading this! The third stanza----NICE!!! Very well done.
Scorp. |
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Re: Wherever Thorns May Grow
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by Eternal_Dreamer on
Friday, 8th July 2005 @ 06:29:03 PM AEST
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Very thought provoking and intensely deep. I'm a real fan of ur work. The imagery u cast into the readers head is so vivid and it keeps them captivated from start to finish.
Always a pleasure to read ur work dearest Clark. Keep 'em coming.
Hugs,
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Re: Wherever Thorns May Grow
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by BloodyTearDrops on
Friday, 8th July 2005 @ 08:51:31 PM AEST
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Clark,
Dont Worry About What Essentially9 Says. I Thought It Was Very Good. But You Know Me I Will Always Think It Is Nice!
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Re: Wherever Thorns May Grow
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by BloodyTearDrops on
Friday, 8th July 2005 @ 08:51:31 PM AEST
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Clark,
Dont Worry About What Essentially9 Says. I Thought It Was Very Good. But You Know Me I Will Always Think It Is Nice!
.:Chelsley:. |
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Re: Wherever Thorns May Grow
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by xXcrossedXx on
Tuesday, 12th July 2005 @ 10:27:12 AM AEST
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I must say I am a little disappointed because the title really caught my eye and I was soooo excited to read through your other poems to get to this one and I don't know what it was about the title but I was expecting more. This was a great right though- really good! I especially like these two lines:
' the silk covered sky,
and blood drenched clouds.'
'row of sewn shut eyes,
and staple sealed mouths,'
Those lines are just phenominal I can't stop reading them, they are so powerful and visual... well done! Really well done!
Keep it up Clark, you're amazing.
.amanda.
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