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Bato'ora Jaispi (Alternate Version)
Contributed by
darkkai
on
Thursday, 9th January 2003 @ 08:40:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
mystical
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DEATH-Part 1
Let darkness fill my sanity,
Let it reach beneath my misery.
Killing the solution of my time
and turn my mind into sadness.
I'll be running with the wolves
to spiritual morality and become
uncertain.... morbid.
I am ready to die.
LIFE-Part 2
Great Spirit, Lift me from my arrow of pain,
On to the wings fo the Golden Child
and we will soar across the winds of time.
Copyright ©
darkkai
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2003-01-09 08:40:00]
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Re: Bato'ora Jaispi (Alternate Version)
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 19th January 2003 @ 01:04:58 PM AEST
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i like it.
i like the positive tone in part 2. |
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Re: Bato'ora Jaispi (Alternate Version)
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by darkeyedman on
Tuesday, 21st January 2003 @ 07:26:23 PM AEST
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| i liked the negative part 1. less filling...tastes great! good poem |
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