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memories
Contributed by
jjones12
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Thursday, 7th July 2005 @ 08:33:31 PM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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you were tough like a piece of rope,
that could never be cut,
but eventually you rope was cut by a knife,
with a heavy burdon that you could not get rid of,
it was impossible,
you were to deep,
you fell down when the rope was cut,
like a pennie falling to the depths of a mossy well with no way to excape,
on that day it felt as if I fell with you all memories of you felt as if the were riped out of my head leaving a whol of darkness that i could never replace,
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2005-07-07 20:33:31]
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Re: memories
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 7th July 2005 @ 09:12:27 PM AEST
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| Not a bad poem, then agan not a good one, what was the whole point to this poem, I did not really understand it, why was the person tough as a rope? And why were the memories ripped out of your head? Seemed as if it did not make any sence to me. Oh ya and may I suggest not using Please Comment, I believe you will get more reads and more comments if you put something Catchy that has to do with poem. SLipSiX. SLip :). |
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