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You deserve it
Contributed by
countrychck
on
Friday, 8th July 2005 @ 12:22:13 AM in AEST
Topic:
goodbyepoetry
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I hope you're happy
With her in your life
With all I've put you through
You really deserve it
I've wasted so much
Of your time, space, and energy
All of which could've been spent
Looking and being with her
I can't believe I was selfish
To keep you all to myself
Even though we were over
I just couldn't say goodbye
But I see how happy your are now
And I don't know why I kept you from that
So I'll do you this one favor
And finally tell you goodbye.
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countrychck
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2005-07-08 00:22:13]
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Re: You deserve it
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 8th July 2005 @ 10:02:01 AM AEST
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A touching poem that realy tugs at the heart
strings, but in essence quite frankly, and
speaking 4 my self? i'd say it's his loss,
he left thesun 4 the moon, and eventualy
will wake up and realize the moon has no light of it's own 2 give, and off he'll go to
look 4 a star 2 give him the warmth he once had with the sun, 2 begin with, happiness must come from within before it can come from outside as with love . . .
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