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For Always...
Contributed by
CarolinaBlue
on
Friday, 8th July 2005 @ 02:34:15 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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For Always...
just two words
I'll never forget
for the rest of my life
these words they haunt me
torture
and
taunt me
nuture
and
feed me
soothe me
completely
leave me here
crying
constantly
sighing
comfort
and
cheer me
love me
sincerely
but still
my heart's bleeding
For Always...
the last words I ever heard you whisper
and the two words
I'll never forget
for the rest of my life
Copyright ©
CarolinaBlue
... [
2005-07-08 02:34:15]
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Re: For Always...
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by Jenni_K on
Friday, 8th July 2005 @ 06:29:36 AM AEST
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Ahh Blue.....well.done....so sad but so positive..
Hugs
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Re: For Always...
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by brew on
Friday, 8th July 2005 @ 10:20:20 AM AEST
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So sorry for the loss of a person who captured your heart. just remember the nice and sweet times, and all will remain...............forever. Nice write, but saddness as well.
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Re: For Always...
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by hauntedscorp on
Friday, 8th July 2005 @ 10:26:29 AM AEST
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Wow. Nice job with this!! The format really made the words and emotions stand out. Well done!
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Re: For Always...
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by Man_On_High on
Saturday, 9th July 2005 @ 12:46:26 AM AEST
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Grief and release all roll into one!
I feel ya Blue..
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Re: For Always...
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by wizard on
Saturday, 9th July 2005 @ 02:51:23 AM AEST
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terrible saddness but your feelings were beautifully described in your write..i really enjoyed the flow and the message.
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