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The veil
Contributed by
ducki
on
Friday, 8th July 2005 @ 06:53:44 AM in AEST
Topic:
self-harmpoetry
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Like a melted down rose, its petals falling to the floor in droplets
Drip
Drip
Drip
Painting the square tiled floor of my reality with the sweet redness of it's lies
The stench of death colliding with metal rises to meet me as the veil dries
Hard
Cracked
Devoid of shine
Copyright ©
ducki
... [
2005-07-08 06:53:44]
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Re: The veil
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 8th July 2005 @ 07:58:02 AM AEST
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nasty but thats how you wanted it
so good job |
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Re: The veil
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by LevyMetal on
Friday, 8th July 2005 @ 12:19:24 PM AEST
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| Very wretched and dark. Loved the pattern at the beginning. |
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Re: The veil
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by Bohemian_with_a_pen on
Saturday, 9th July 2005 @ 06:22:45 AM AEST
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| incredible, i love it!! well done |
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Re: The veil
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by sicknivesevered on
Saturday, 16th July 2005 @ 05:01:45 PM AEST
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| Wow, great write. ^^ I love how it ends. |
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