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When no one is Watching
Contributed by
dreamer_for_eternity
on
Friday, 8th July 2005 @ 03:47:24 PM in AEST
Topic:
secrets
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The bleeding sunset
Shows to go on home
It is nightfall when you can see
What others do alone
When no one is watching
Some couples fight
Some children are beat
Some take their lives
When no one is watching
All I can do is think
Why is the world turning on us
What is causing us to sink?
If you are broken
Lost or confused
Please, hang in there
Please remain infused
The only thing I can say
Is you gotta believe
Our struggles and trials
Will be relieved
Don't take the easy way
To leave this life
You are not a coward
You can handle your strife
I believe in you
I want to help
Because I fully understand
It's hard all by yourself
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2005-07-08 15:47:24]
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Re: When no one is Watching
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by Unbreakable on
Friday, 8th July 2005 @ 03:51:07 PM AEST
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Wow...this poem is so inspirational, great write. ...and thank you, it's nice to know some people in the world still care..
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Re: When no one is Watching
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by Man_On_High on
Friday, 8th July 2005 @ 10:34:16 PM AEST
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thus far... 6 have read..and only 1 comment...
why, is beyond me.
(lest they are the ones hurting)
great write..and with a most important message..
(love yourself)
can't count on others to...
B |
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Re: When no one is Watching
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by Writting_Fever on
Saturday, 20th August 2005 @ 05:40:44 PM AEST
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| Great write! I like to know that you're understanding about everything in your poem and that you seem to be there for anyone who needs you. |
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