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Death at 14
Contributed by
Lost4EvEr1541
on
Thursday, 9th January 2003 @ 12:00:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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Cut and Pain
Tears begin to fall.
Suicide note,
Written on the wall.
Fear and Sadness,
Screams that no one hears.
Thoughts of death,
At 14 years.
Cutting, Slicing,
Blood begins to pour.
Im such a *****,
A little whore.
Truth reveled,
Pills down my throat.
My last few words,
A suicide note.
Teenager gone,
Friends begin to see,
An empty desk,
Where I should be.
I lie on the floor,
Hoping someone would walk in.
Seeing me there, on the floor,
Blood coming from within.
I was 14 years old,
When my last tears, I cried.
But the truth is,
I never wanted suicide.
But my last words written,
Were to my bestest friend.
The most important person,
Had to watch my life end.
I wanted to be saved,
In my blood I swam,
But I left with a laugh
Just Admiring You Banana Bread Maam
Copyright ©
Lost4EvEr1541
... [
2003-01-09 12:00:00]
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Re: Death at 14
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by Rage on
Thursday, 9th January 2003 @ 12:20:19 PM AEST
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| Absolutely loved this poem! Great write! |
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Re: Death at 14
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by LOWMAN613 on
Thursday, 9th January 2003 @ 01:31:56 PM AEST
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| Wow this was a great write,so very sad on suicide but very well written here! Christina |
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Re: Death at 14
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by Valerie_Pearson on
Thursday, 9th January 2003 @ 02:09:25 PM AEST
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| I hope you really don't feel that way, life is a wonderful thing we all are given, you are given a special assignment when you arrive here, and until its finished please stay with us, take care, |
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Re: Death at 14
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by idiotbox on
Thursday, 9th January 2003 @ 09:54:16 PM AEST
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| this is a great poem! you really make the reader see and feel great write! |
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Re: Death at 14
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by Jeff_Scott_Morehead on
Friday, 28th February 2003 @ 10:49:09 PM AEST
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You have a great talent, hope someday you'll write about things not quiet soo dark.
Jeff |
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Re: Death at 14
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by DeLeriousTearZ on
Saturday, 5th April 2003 @ 10:10:03 PM AEST
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| this is such a great poem. I totally feel it! Keep writing!!!! |
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Re: Death at 14
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by Hiddendarkness1705 on
Thursday, 17th July 2003 @ 12:36:13 PM AEST
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| I don't get the last line. But I think this was well put together. You have a talent. But remember. Your in for hell..but you will overcome it. Life only has to get better. |
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Re: Death at 14
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by outlaw_mutiny on
Friday, 2nd December 2005 @ 08:55:04 PM AEST
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good poem
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