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amongst my thorns
Contributed by
igba
on
Saturday, 9th July 2005 @ 08:50:09 AM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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pounding footfalls close in on me
scorching heat breathes down my neck
i plead passionately with my lungs not to give up on me
another squeal of pain tears my throat
the cactus kisses me enthusiastically
my raging wounds caresses me
in my terror,my sanity flees
an attempt to yell for you leaves me coughing blood
just like a prayer u emerge gracefully
with a snow white towel and a first aid kit
a look of horror on ur face at my bloodied state
with careful steps u approached
my arms outstretched,my lips cracks at my attempt to smile
i look up,longingly at you to ease my pains
u tenderly hold me up and push me over the cliff
i fall, i fall, i fall amongst my thorns
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igba
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2005-07-09 08:50:09]
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Re: amongst my thorns
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by Unbreakable on
Saturday, 9th July 2005 @ 09:08:37 AM AEST
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Good write...I was definitely caught off guard by the ending, it's an interesting twist. I like your title, very appropriate...keep it up
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