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Soothe the Burn
Contributed by
LabWolf
on
Saturday, 9th July 2005 @ 08:51:42 AM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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How can I be myself?
I don't know who I am.
How can I believe in life?
I don't know where I stand.
Endless wandering...
Forever wondering...
Don't know who
or what I am.
Ceaseless craving...
Constant raving...
Don't want to be
what I have been.
If I could look through your eyes
How would I appear?
If I could use your ears to listen
what else could I hear?
Restless dreaming...
Mental screaming...
Can't seem to handle
the pain of today.
Death - rehearsal...
Life reversal...
Seeing the anguish
in a whole new way.
If I could read between my lines,
I wonder what I'd learn.
How can I ever find peace
using fire to soothe the burn?
Barry Veinotte
Copyright ©
LabWolf
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2005-07-09 08:51:42]
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Re: Soothe the Burn
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by Unbreakable on
Saturday, 9th July 2005 @ 09:04:28 AM AEST
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Great write...I think you and I must have similar writing styles or something, because I can relate to your poem so much even though you leave your poem quite open for interpretation. My favourite poems are the ones left open to interpretation..Great job, keep it up
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