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Unsaid
Contributed by
Bones
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Saturday, 9th July 2005 @ 11:35:35 AM in AEST
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I dont want to leave anything unsaid.
I told you once Ill tell you before were dead.
Truth is this you never know when well leave this world.
So let me do this now,
The only way I know how.
Back when we were young, 10 years younger, you were the girl I was madly in love with.
Ive tried so hard to let you know, but I doubt it helped when I gave you those rings as a gift.
Many times I could of told you how I feel.
So I sit there asking myself, Whats the deal??
So many girls I dated, but it never worked out.
Cause you kept popping into my mind, with no doubt.
I mean I love you, but this seemed like obsession.
It was like I didnt any possession,
I needed in life was you.
I couldnt figure out what to do.
Why couldnt I just walk up to you and say, Im in love with you.?
Sometimes I think Im too crazy to live.
But for you, itd my life I give.
Weve been best friends for the longest of time.
So I consider not telling you I love you a crime.
Cause I was committing treason against myself.
But I had no real reason to blame myself.
Im just too shy at times, and thats all there is to it.
I just wish I could gather the guts to admit it.
Ive always been there for you.
Ill do anything for you.
I dont care what anyone else thinks,
I only care about you think.
So many people in my life, it gets confusing.
But when Im with you, Im at ease; Im in my happy place.
But when we have to depart, my heart just crumbles.
Cause I never want to leave you, I want to stay by your side.
When I needed you the most, you were there.
When I wanted you the most, you were there.
When my life was falling to pieces, you set me back on track.
You may not realize this, but you help me more than you can imagine.
Thats one reason why Ill always be there for you,
Thats one reason why Ill always be in love with you.
Copyright ©
Bones
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2005-07-09 11:35:35]
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Re: Unsaid
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by kodiak_2312 on
Saturday, 9th July 2005 @ 02:53:18 PM AEST
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This was such a sweet loving poem
I hope she gets to read this!
Keep up the great work!
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Re: Unsaid
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by Arden on
Saturday, 9th July 2005 @ 02:53:54 PM AEST
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its a nice heartfelt and caring poem. but, its to long, its like your trying to hard to express your feelings and poems like this dont need to be that long, but thats just my opinion.
and if your gonna rhyme the poem, dont have bits and pieces where it does rhyme and others that dont rhyme at all.
As for the subject matter, youve only got one lifetime to live and as you said in the poem- "Truth is this you never know when we’ll leave this world."
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Re: Unsaid
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by sprinter27 on
Saturday, 9th July 2005 @ 11:31:37 PM AEST
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nice write, bones! i liked reading this one and that girl is pretty lucky. and we are all shy at times, especially when it comes to love. i hope that you get the courage to tell her about this and she shares the same feelings for you. back to the poem: it was good and i liked your choice of words at times: very nice! and i liked how you got the emotion out. good luck in getting her to fall for you!
~sprints
p.s. good work, keep it up! |
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