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A confused heart
Contributed by
brokenwings
on
Sunday, 10th July 2005 @ 05:07:55 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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love me, hate me, beat me, leave me
take my rotting heart
let the pain run free
tear me, tear my life apart
beat me, scratch me, defeat me
I dispise you for it all
sorry forever could not be
The phone never rings you never call
Its not the way things should be
broken hearted, confused alone
Damn you, curse you, forget you
Thats the way it must be
DROP DEAD!!!!! GO AWAY!!!!
NO!!!! baby please stay
GET OUT!!! LEAVE
ITS SO EASY FOR YOU,
come back baby i miss you
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brokenwings
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2005-07-10 05:07:55]
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Re: A confused heart
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 10th July 2005 @ 12:09:51 PM AEST
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I'd say your off 2 a good start if this was'nt in your face, i don't know what is, and the ambiguity of it u have a powerful stye stay with it , brilliantly forceful, the anger yet the last bit of hope and longing great poem u r
a hell of writter,effective and revealing . . .
Ben |
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Re: A confused heart
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 10th July 2005 @ 05:50:09 PM AEST
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my oh my I have the same prob.
lol Read the poem I post a few day ago
name A fine line between love and nausea
you can relate Im sorry your poem was very
expressive and hateful then at the end you
said come back i miss you
I said thank god I'm not the only one |
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