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Dirty Girl
Contributed by
vox
on
Sunday, 10th July 2005 @ 11:00:27 AM in AEST
Topic:
fantasy
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Im not made of pearls
Im just a plain ol dirty girl.
Who always likes to play
Dirty games in dirty ways.
I like to see you sweat
To tie a cloth around your neck
And handcuffs in each wrist
And play on games that dont exist.
Is it too much for you?
Can you keep up in what I do?
You feeling kinda weak?
Your mouth is tide, you cannot speak.
But I know what you want.
So just stay still, and Ill do my stuff.
And when you wake the next day
Youll crave for me in everyway.
But when you call my name
I wont be there, aint that a shame?
Copyright ©
vox
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2005-07-10 11:00:27]
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Re: Dirty Girl
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by xXcrossedXx on
Sunday, 10th July 2005 @ 11:56:39 AM AEST
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| A sick write but in a good way lol This was great I really enjoyed it, your feelings came across and so did the situation. Nice job, keep it up. |
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Re: Dirty Girl
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by AmyLee4Ever on
Sunday, 10th July 2005 @ 06:11:27 PM AEST
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Oh, wow... this is a disturbing write. Hmm... yet, the situation and how you felt came across so well. I know exactly how you felt. I felt like I was you, though I am not sure if I wanted to. That just shows that this is a great write...
Jodi |
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Re: Dirty Girl
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 10th July 2005 @ 08:36:24 PM AEST
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It turned me on oh yeah
I love a dirty girl but doesn't
stink "Wink Wink" I think with your
permission I would like to write the guy
verson Big Pappa's dirty
Great job at expression you hormotions
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Re: Dirty Girl
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by RoxyGirl on
Friday, 15th July 2005 @ 01:42:35 AM AEST
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I like this poem it was very well wrietn and I hope to hear more.
LOVE ALWAYS YOUR FRIEND
ROXYGIRL |
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