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Eternal Love
Contributed by
xxSuicidalChickxx
on
Sunday, 10th July 2005 @ 05:19:55 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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I dont think this pain
Will ever go away
It wont leave
It wants to stay
But no matter what I do
The pain is still there
I cry and cut
And it remains there
I dont know what to do
This pain remains here
And it just makes me
Want to be more near
To death
And soon it will be too late
For anyone to help me
Cause Ill find my fate
And when I decide
What to do
Ill get the knife
And push it through
My shirt
And into my heart
Cause I cant stand
To be apart
From you
And when Ive died
Ill be with you again
Where we can stand, side to side
Forever in this place
Its better than the world
We faced
Its better than the heaven above
But not as good as our eternal love
Copyright ©
xxSuicidalChickxx
... [
2005-07-10 17:19:55]
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Re: Eternal Love
(User Rating: 1 )
by ForeverAlone on
Sunday, 10th July 2005 @ 08:19:21 PM AEST
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hrm, again this has potential and is pretty good, i like this and the ending is rather powerful, nice job
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