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Þjáning framtíðarinnar
Contributed by
kolbrun
on
Thursday, 9th January 2003 @ 06:20:00 PM in AEST
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Lifepoems
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essi verld dag, essi daua ganga,
vi hldum fram sem hlekkjair fangar.
Hvert lfsins barn sem fist hr,
ekkert ess bur nema heimsins eyinga her.
Himinninn er fallinn, fr hann af braut,
fjandinn sjlfur, etta er hin versta raut.
Hi sasta blm ber hi sasta fr,
allt verur bi ef a sekkur s.
skal berjast, skal jst,
vont verur a koma, ekkiru st.
Snum samstu, sameinumst ll,
siglum fram og vinnum okkar vll.
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kolbrun
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2003-01-09 18:20:00]
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Re: Þjáning framtíðarinnar
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by lil_angel on
Thursday, 9th January 2003 @ 09:35:32 PM AEST
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| i dont understand it true, but it seems to be a wonderful poem |
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Re: Þjáning framtíðarinnar
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by aernby on
Thursday, 9th January 2003 @ 11:21:35 PM AEST
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wish i understood better--the poem seems intricate -- aliteration, and word play some a t least have break mid line --- much like anglo-saxon poetry.
good write
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Re: Þjáning framtíðarinnar
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by kolbrun on
Friday, 10th January 2003 @ 05:54:49 AM AEST
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| thank you..........=) |
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Re: Þjáning framtíðarinnar
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by kolbrun on
Friday, 10th January 2003 @ 05:55:33 AM AEST
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| thank you........... =) |
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Re: Þjáning framtíðarinnar
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by Lia on
Sunday, 12th January 2003 @ 11:48:24 PM AEST
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| I don't have the first clue of what this says..but..I don't need to. It's absolutely beautiful. It could be a bunch of gibberish for all i care..the look, the feel, it's just...beautiful... |
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Re: Þjáning framtíðarinnar
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by maria_mendonez_ibardolas on
Friday, 17th January 2003 @ 08:27:55 AM AEST
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| hehehehehehe I think this is the best poem that I ever read. I have no clue at all but just stare at some of the words written in your language.Wish I could understand it but I guess there is no chance for that.Anyway its still lovely,I guess so? |
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Re: Þjáning framtíðarinnar
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 19th March 2003 @ 07:25:53 AM AEST
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very nice, great write.
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Re: Þjáning framtíðarinnar
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by Gribba on
Tuesday, 6th May 2003 @ 06:00:43 AM AEST
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Þetta er ótrúlega flott hjá þér...
Þessar línur
"Þessi veröld í dag, þessi dauða ganga,
við höldum áfram sem hlekkjaðir fangar.
Hvert lífsins barn sem fæðist hér,
ekkert þess bíður nema heimsins eyðinga her. "
ég bara féll fyrir þeim...
Áhrifamikið og sterkt!!!
næsta erindi er einnig jafn áhrifa mikið en það fyrsta bara skellur í andlitið á manni...
varðandi síðasta erindið finnst mér tvær síðustu línurnar ekki alveg viðeigandi, draga svolítð úr áhrifum ljóðsins...
en persónulega finnst mér að ljóðið ætti að enda á þessu:
"Þá skal berjast, þá skal þjást,
vont verður að koma, þá þekkiru ást. "
ef mögulegt er að setja eitthvað á undan svo ljóði haldi sinni upprunalegu mynd og formi.
En annars geggjað flott ljóð!!! |
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