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Broke Me
Contributed by
imagenuinefake
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Sunday, 10th July 2005 @ 10:19:41 PM in AEST
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I'm so scared,
To talk to anyone about it.
I'm so scared,
Cause I can't talk to you.
I'm so scared,
Cause nobody believes me.
I'm so scared,
That he'll do it again.
He ripped my body,
And tore it in half.
I felt like he also,
Took my soul,
My laugh.
I feel like I'll never,
Be able to smile,
Cause he broke me,
He took me away and broke me.
Why didn't you stop him?
Why did you let him break me?
Why did he do it...?
I can't help but blame me.
He took m body,
And he broke me.
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2005-07-10 22:19:41]
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Re: Broke Me
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by Unbreakable on
Sunday, 10th July 2005 @ 11:00:21 PM AEST
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I can relate to every single word in your poem. I've never been able to write about it though because it's just so personal and I've never told anyone. I want to comend you on your courage and your ability to put what you feel into words. And if you ever need someone to talk to don't hesitate to pm me or email @ neverthesametwice@gmail.com. I know you don't know me, but sometimes it's good to talk to someone who can relate.
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Re: Broke Me
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by allforyou on
Sunday, 10th July 2005 @ 11:56:37 PM AEST
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oh my gosh...ur words just made me relive the worst thing that could happen to anyone and i'm ohhhhh so sorry if this has happened to u too....if u EVER need someone to talk to...i know i'm a complete stranger...but my door is always open.
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Re: Broke Me
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by Sexi_Lexi on
Monday, 11th July 2005 @ 01:17:27 PM AEST
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| I kno that rape is a very serious thing and i think that u relate to it very well! And i think that ur very inspirational to any other people that hav been raped and can't talk about it and now they can thanks to you. |
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Re: Broke Me
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by Dorkfish on
Wednesday, 13th July 2005 @ 03:54:53 PM AEST
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| I'm very sorry that happened to you, but it's good that you can get it out and be open about it. It helps with the pain. You did an excellent job expressing yourself, it really made us understand how you felt. Thank you for sharing and again I am so sorry. |
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