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Running
Contributed by
lifefliesby
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Sunday, 10th July 2005 @ 10:33:54 PM in AEST
Topic:
InspirationalPoems
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Push on
Go forth
Pant and groan
Whine
Complain
But where will you get?
Nowhere
You'll stop
Fall right to the ground
A useless pile of wastedness
So go!
Press on!
Get to that light
That corner
That sign
Just keep on going
Ah ha
You've done it
Think how you've come
The speed
The stamina
The energy
Now rest
Not long
Just enough to start
And then go again
Press on
Go forth
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Re: Running
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by liquidsunshine on
Sunday, 10th July 2005 @ 10:39:33 PM AEST
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Nicely done.
I like the repetition.
It's an interesting look at what goes on inside that handsome head of yours.
~wink, wink~
Love and peace,
Chelsea
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Re: Running
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by blue_angel on
Sunday, 10th July 2005 @ 10:51:14 PM AEST
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awesome... great poem i love yer style... i run xc too... ppl say its crazy and ask why i do it... idk why its just something i do... thats awesome... keep it up
luv n hugs,
jennie*
just keep running just keep running... lol |
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