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rats and wild cats
Contributed by
lostrelic
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Monday, 11th July 2005 @ 03:21:21 AM in AEST
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alone in the dark a scared little child alone
wandering the streets looking for warmth
sinful looks from dirty old men
feeling there looks slimy dirty
run from this fear hide wait
the vagrents have left
crawl threw a window of an abanded warehouse
dry dirty panties and condoms spewn on the floor
crack cans and dirty rigs another four star room
rats and wild cats fight in the lite
my entertainment tonight
tommorow another soup kitchen and another lie
i am 16 my parents both died
alone in the back of another church
waiting for coffee and cookies
why do they cram the poor with religion
if god loved me why am i here
another nite of finding a home
another nite of hate
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2005-07-11 03:21:21]
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Re: rats and wild cats
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by Benny14 on
Monday, 11th July 2005 @ 03:41:46 AM AEST
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| very powerful ending |
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Re: rats and wild cats
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by deadheadpoet on
Tuesday, 12th July 2005 @ 01:21:22 AM AEST
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| The write is good and hard hitting. It sucks that this happens in this so called "modernized" world every day. Peace to you. Laura |
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