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Tire Marks
Contributed by
Benny14
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Monday, 11th July 2005 @ 02:19:35 PM in AEST
Topic:
StoryPoetry
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Every tire mark on this road tells a story
A tale is told of hesitance or evasiveness
Or compassion for an animal, small and weak
A reason behind the superficial streak
Select few know the emotions incurred
So many questions go unanswered
Was the problem internal or external?
Was it human or machine?
Why to the left and not the right?
Did they make it home that night?
So many questions go unanswered
Like undecipherable symbols
Soon the parchment, as well the story, will be forgotten
And in the end all that matters is the road that carries on
Remembering those bygone, be gone, forgone, and traveling soon at dawn.
Copyright ©
Benny14
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2005-07-11 14:19:35]
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Re: Tire Marks
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by zenaprincess on
Monday, 11th July 2005 @ 02:30:04 PM AEST
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| such an interesting topic - i've often wondered about marks on the road as you must have. Beautifully written. |
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Re: Tire Marks
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by justme03 on
Monday, 11th July 2005 @ 02:41:34 PM AEST
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wow. i really loved this is. it was written really well and i loved the whole idea of it and ive actually thought of this before but never so deeply. loved it. very thought provoaking.
BRAVO!
luv, ~Kortnie~ |
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Re: Tire Marks
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by deadheadpoet on
Tuesday, 12th July 2005 @ 12:57:31 AM AEST
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| Very good. An interesting subject. I too like to ponder at times on the simple, but not so simple. I like this a lot. Great write. Much peace to you. Laura |
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