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Dance Of Silence
Contributed by
vox
on
Monday, 11th July 2005 @ 03:01:56 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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In the darkness with the cool breeze
And the warmth smell of the lit candles
She sits in a corner.
Her visions blurring the world around her
Shes trying to escape in any way she can.
But the frozen night outside whispers
this isnt paradise, youre somewhere else.
And the voices inside her head come to life
Filling her silence.
As they whisper slowly:
welcome to the world of no return.
Come. Lets dance the dance of delight.
Lets dance, so life we can forget.
Her mind is no more sane
And ghosts are drowning her
As they drunk her with sweet wine.
Inside the mirror, another form,
A form dark, is trying to get out
And embrace her.
And from somewhere far a voice can be heard
Whispering to her ear:
relax, dont try to resist
You know that you cant.
Come. Lets dance the dance of silence.
Lets dance so youll forget.
She stood up slow staring at the void
As she said with words so low:
were prisoners in our own soul.
Is there a way of escape?
The answer she already knew.
So she started to dance.
And into silence she lost herself.
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vox
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2005-07-11 15:01:56]
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Re: Dance Of Silence
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by Essentially9 on
Monday, 11th July 2005 @ 10:42:34 PM AEST
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| with dialog you need to capitalize the first letter after the quotation mark. i think this would be better in stanzas, because sometimes it was a bit confusing with a switch in topics. interesting poem though, kept my attention. |
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