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The First Kiss
Contributed by
vox
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Monday, 11th July 2005 @ 03:12:27 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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I couldn't feel the ground,
the world started spinning around.
The stars fell from the sky,
I had wings, i could fly.
I saw the fireworks
i felt that i could rule the world.
And why i felt like this?
Because of my first kiss.
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Re: The First Kiss
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by Jenni_K on
Monday, 11th July 2005 @ 11:09:26 PM AEST
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Awww that first kiss...something to treasure always.. Even tho it's been many years for me..I'll never forget mine..
Cute write
Jenni |
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Re: The First Kiss
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by SinginSilence on
Tuesday, 12th July 2005 @ 01:47:16 AM AEST
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| cute indeed, though for some reason i remember this nervousness combined with nausia before hand, but i'm sure that's just me. but of course i can relate to this aspect of it too. cool poem. |
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