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temptations broken end
Contributed by
hardrocker15198916
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Monday, 11th July 2005 @ 03:37:46 PM in AEST
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be it not temptation grows
hiding here and no one knows
slipping into the mad minded scum
oh now look what have you become?
see i didnt know it from the start
you would break my healing heart
but the sin wasnt here no there
was it you who ever cared
deliver me from the imortal sin
so maybe it wont begin again
hailing off to the sea so infinate
reaching out to the broken end
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2005-07-11 15:37:46]
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Re: temptations broken end
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by ruthie1983 on
Tuesday, 19th July 2005 @ 12:22:28 PM AEST
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| I like this poem cuz its short and gets to the point. Thanks for posting comment on my poem. great work! |
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Re: temptations broken end
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by Drapes on
Thursday, 9th March 2006 @ 09:32:08 PM AEST
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Nice. Short but to the point. Good write!
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