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Final verse
Contributed by
Dying_angel
on
Monday, 11th July 2005 @ 05:55:47 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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And so she screamed,
As she beared deaths kiss,
She wept what he simply,
Could not dimiss.
Lying on her death bed,
Where she had previously slept,
Her final verse
And this is what she wept...
Bleeding Hearts,
Pouring Sores,
Tortured Souls,
Forever Yours...
Copyright ©
Dying_angel
... [
2005-07-11 17:55:47]
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Re: Final verse
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by imagenuinefake on
Monday, 11th July 2005 @ 06:24:20 PM AEST
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| I like this poem. REALLY good! |
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Re: Final verse
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by Jackee_line on
Monday, 11th July 2005 @ 06:38:30 PM AEST
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| Well done |
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Re: Final verse
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by dreamer_4_eternity on
Monday, 11th July 2005 @ 07:09:44 PM AEST
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| this is SOOO powerful!!! My favorite line out of the whole thing would have to be "Forever Yours..." although I loved the whole last stanza, and the whole poem itself! Great job!!! never stop writing, you are awesome! |
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Re: Final verse
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by lil_noel09 on
Sunday, 27th November 2005 @ 10:55:55 PM AEST
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| very nice :D |
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