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Rebirth
Contributed by
FleurdeSang
on
Monday, 11th July 2005 @ 08:15:02 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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The moon woke me with a tender kiss,
Pallid loneliness radiating from her solemn smile,
Neon static numbers mouthing,
3:00 A.M.!! (A familiar song)
With their hoarse voices of silent restlessness
My child fingers itched with anticipation,
Yearning to weave expressions of moonlit inspiration,
Longing to paint a picture of you
With your technicolor eyes of bittersweet mystery,
Slowly undressing me naked and vulnerable
Every shrouded flaw, every hidden desire
EXPOSED
I remember
Your breath of cherries and lust, intoxicating,
Words spoken in silence caressing the edges of my sanity
I wonder each passing moment
What lies behind those clouded orbs of eternity?
Divine intervention found in a touch,
Flames of passion and adoration lick the curves of my heart,
Burning down the walls surrounding my soul, my sacred palace,
Where every thought and emotion sleeps tranquilly
Today, I was reborn,
Rubbing the residues of crusty slumber from my dreaming eyes,
Yawning at the dreariness of Yesterday
Just by thinking of you
Copyright ©
FleurdeSang
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2005-07-11 20:15:02]
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Re: Rebirth
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by bobotheclown on
Tuesday, 12th July 2005 @ 02:15:49 AM AEST
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Amazing poem my dear. I love the first line
and how you personify the moon that was
just wonderful. I just all around loved how this
was written. I'd say more but I'm really tired. I
hope the hurricane isn't affecting you.
Miss talking to you,
Joel |
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Re: Rebirth
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by emystar on
Tuesday, 12th July 2005 @ 06:08:40 AM AEST
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Bretakingly beautifull.
huggs,
emy |
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