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Broken Hearted
Contributed by
PoisonousPyscho
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Monday, 11th July 2005 @ 09:52:18 PM in AEST
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Broken Hearted
They broke my heart
They stabbed me and made me bleed
They took away my ability to love
They threw my heart to the other ends of the world
So that I cant find them again
They lied to me
They made me cry
They made me choose
I almost died
They said I would be okay
They thought I was fine
So they walked away
And I did die
Now I am gone
Gone in the mind, but still standing there
They all wish I was here
But they dont shed a tear
~Rene~
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Re: Broken Hearted
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by Jibz on
Monday, 11th July 2005 @ 11:01:19 PM AEST
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| Whoa! very deep.. and you know how freaky is this? I know almost EXACTLY how you feel or how the feelings are potrayed in this poem. Great job.. And if you really and truly feel this way.. I pray things work out for you |
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