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Darkness
Contributed by
Red_Spyder_Pixie
on
Tuesday, 12th July 2005 @ 02:25:22 AM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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when i leave,
please don't cry.
you have to know,
i want to die.
i have nothing left,
inside my heart.
not sure that i've,
been alive from the start.
i try to sleep,
it won't work i know.
so i grab my razor,
and in i go.
blood spills,
down the drains.
i cut more and more,
until not more blood remains.
peaceful sleep,
i'm here at last.
forget me please,
and forget real fast.
Copyright ©
Red_Spyder_Pixie
... [
2005-07-12 02:25:22]
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Re: Darkness
(User Rating: 1 )
by Bohemian_with_a_pen on
Tuesday, 12th July 2005 @ 09:52:58 AM AEST
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| great write, well done |
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Re: Darkness
(User Rating: 1 )
by Shyness on
Tuesday, 12th July 2005 @ 10:34:56 AM AEST
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| Hey I like the way your poem is writen but what it says kinnda bothers me. I hope you are not a cutter and if you were I hope you arent anymore your a great person remember that :) |
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