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Rain
Contributed by
roxygirl
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Tuesday, 12th July 2005 @ 02:34:44 AM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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Rain fall on me
I sit here with tears in my eyes
Not knowing were you gone why did you go
Why did you leave me with no goodbye
You lefted me with so much pain that I can not take
You said you loved me and you'd die for me
That I was your only love
Rain fall on me
I can still remeber the day I awoke and you were no where in site
I thought maybe you went to the store and you'd be back
I maked pancakes and waited all night
You never came
Rain fall on me
I called you 50 times I was so afraid that you had got hurt
I never thought you would go and leave me like this
You said we where going to get married
But that was a lie
what did I do pleace let me know I will change
Thats how much I love you
Rain fall on me
I cant believe I losted the one I loved for so many years
He doesn't wont me any more
I'm I ugly now
Why did he say he loved me if he was only going to hurt me
I don't understand
If he loved me so much he could of at leased said goodbye
Rain fall on me
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roxygirl
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2005-07-12 02:34:44]
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Re: Rain
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by happy_girl on
Tuesday, 12th July 2005 @ 02:42:03 AM AEST
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I loved the way you wrote this poem.
you seem really talented.
take care,
marjan |
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Re: Rain
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by all_the_dead_roses on
Tuesday, 12th July 2005 @ 09:35:20 PM AEST
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thnx for the comment, i really like your poetry, it really seems like it comes from the heart, awesome job, i'd love to hear more.
::::::Sara:::::: |
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