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cold morning died evening
Contributed by
sushant
on
Tuesday, 12th July 2005 @ 10:45:50 AM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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Once upon a cold morning i saw
while hurrying down a crowded path
by the looks of him a labourers boy
lying on the ground, twitching without no sound
Wondered whether i should wonder whats wrong with him
i wondered wrong and left him their
reasoned the world is full of people
people who can help and those people will
As evening came and i hurried back home
a cold grey night and i clutched my coat
in my hurry took a wrong decision
and stopped by a dead end
felt colder than ever before
many dead ends i have stood before
but the one dead end i was standing before
was just as dead as the boy bellow
(G.G.)Sushant Gaur
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sushant
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2005-07-12 10:45:50]
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Re: cold morning died evening
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by In_a_while on
Tuesday, 12th July 2005 @ 04:26:52 PM AEST
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very impressive! a story/poem very well told.. and with such a strong ending too!
keep up the good writing
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