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I know the Cuts
Contributed by
xXcrossedXx
on
Tuesday, 12th July 2005 @ 11:22:17 AM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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Don't Fret I'm Not Dead...
I know I shouldn't do it,
I know that people care,
I know the cuts,
Shouldn't be there.
I know that I feel hopeless,
I know I feel alone,
I know the cuts,
Shouldn't be shown.
I know people think I'm smart,
I know people think I'm beautiful,
But I also know,
The cuts look really cool.
I know that I feel fat,
I know I shouldn't talk like that,
I know the knife and I shouldn't have met,
I know the cuts,
Didn't kill me...
Yet.
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xXcrossedXx
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Re: I know the Cuts
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by justme03 on
Tuesday, 12th July 2005 @ 11:37:49 AM AEST
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wow
i totally love the layout of this poem and it is very well written. nice job.
i also can relate because ive been through this. its a tought thing to go through.
i wish u the best
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Re: I know the Cuts
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by Pats4eva7 on
Tuesday, 12th July 2005 @ 12:46:13 PM AEST
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This was an awsome poem, sad though, it portrayed so many feelings and lonliness that comes along with self mutilation. I know the pain you are going through, because I myself am a cutter. If you ever need to talk im here for you! If you would life, you can read some of my poems. Huggs!!
*pats4eva*
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Re: I know the Cuts
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by deathdrop on
Tuesday, 12th July 2005 @ 06:34:44 PM AEST
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i self-harm, and i used to feel like this... and i know that if you continue, your arms will be as screwed up as mine or possilbly worse, and it later years, you'll regret it when you find people don't understand and are mean towards you.
be strong.
... and i (trust me), i know quiting's NOT easy, so if you can't quit then atleast don't do it deep, 'cuz that way there's a chance of them fading...
may peace be with you.
from rosie |
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Re: I know the Cuts
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by hauntedscorp on
Wednesday, 13th July 2005 @ 01:50:51 PM AEST
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This is a very strongly worded write Amanda...Very sad. Subject aside, I like the format, and the way the first and last line not only tie in with the prospective lines, but how they tie in with each other as well. As for the topic of cutting...I can only hope you stop hurting yourself before it's too late. No one should feel the need to hurt themselves like that...You seem to be a very smart girl, who writes wonderful poetry, and I think you have a lot to feel special about. Hopefully you'll see that one day when you look in the mirror...Take Care, and if you ever want to talk to someone, feel free to pm me...
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Re: I know the Cuts
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by Essentially9 on
Thursday, 14th July 2005 @ 12:07:43 AM AEST
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"The cuts look really cool." this line irks me because it changed the entire tone of the poem. your ending was powerful. and your repetitions actually worked for this poem. well hopefully they wont kill you yet for a very long time then.
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Re: I know the Cuts
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by killingmehslowly on
Sunday, 14th August 2005 @ 03:20:27 AM AEST
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| I agree with Jen, the "The cuts look really cool" line is just bothersome to me. As for the rest of your poem, it had a more unique style to it and I like the flow and the rhythm. It's an awesome poem. Brava. |
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Re: I know the Cuts
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by xXx_lil_pyro_xXx on
Monday, 5th September 2005 @ 09:25:17 AM AEST
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omg amanda you of all people know that i can relate. i loved the whole thing it was a great peice to put your feelings into. you did really well with the flow and rhyming patterns and it ended perfectly. the cuts won't kill if you don't let them, please hold on amanda i'm always here if u need me... even though most of the time it seems that i need you. i'll always be here for you.
luv u cuzz
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