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Hatred
Contributed by
trini
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Tuesday, 12th July 2005 @ 06:38:34 PM in AEST
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I have a certain loathing spite a hatred for you and all that you do
Haul me through the mud one last time
And youll see how altered I can be
When my despise turns to you
Think you have escaped this hell hole?
NO WAY!
Your lies, deceits, and kills have caught up.
And guess what?
Youve dug yourself an early grave
So pat the dirt down with one last lie
A counterfeit smile
And your forged life
This is what you have chosen
You left me there in my own fantasy of you and all that you were
But I was really just broken betrayed
And bleeding on the sidewalk
But thats the past
And now I smile at your beaten, forgotten body
As your last victim has turned the tables
And now you suffer
Copyright ©
trini
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2005-07-12 18:38:34]
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Re: Hatred
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by AfterLivingDeath on
Tuesday, 12th July 2005 @ 07:59:39 PM AEST
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hell ya it doez. i hate being led on.
your poem was very vivid. and i can relate so well.
you explained everything perfectly. and that's exactly how i felt for the longest time with some guy.
well i really liked your poem, keep up the good work.
~ALD~ |
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