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Feeling of Doubt
Contributed by
spazz911
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Tuesday, 12th July 2005 @ 07:33:51 PM in AEST
Topic:
anguished
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i have a feeling of doubt
itching my in mind
to scratch it pointless
i refusses to lay down
no matter what i hear
i can't help but wonder
so much is going on
and i have nothing to plunder
i have thought of it so often
and it never seems fair
i just stand over here
and watch them over there
those of you lost souls
looking for peace
we must stick together
and solve this huge beast
without ourselves
we are lost within
and to be lost
is the most painful sin
Copyright ©
spazz911
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2005-07-12 19:33:51]
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Re: Feeling of Doubt
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by sandypoet on
Tuesday, 12th July 2005 @ 07:42:00 PM AEST
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| Tears fall from my eyes because one.. I just wrote a poem about my life. and 2.. you remind me of me.. maybe you need to read my poem. as for the way you wrote the poem.. I like it very much.. my favorite lines is this... I just stand over here.. and watch them over there... sandy |
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