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trapped abyss
Contributed by
spazz911
on
Tuesday, 12th July 2005 @ 10:36:20 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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trapped
the walls are closing in
darkness black as sin
as death breathes through the room
penatrating the darkest nights
sweeping softly fading lights
seeping into dark delights
coating pillows as we sleep
entering our hollowed minds
filling them with ecstasy
lurching into what we speak
slipping into what we preach
controlling as the walls around us
slowly sinking they surround us
what is happening to this world
the crowed caos we unfurl
now the time has come to this
let us die in trapped abyss
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spazz911
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2005-07-12 22:36:20]
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Re: trapped abyss
(User Rating: 1 )
by blue_angel on
Tuesday, 12th July 2005 @ 10:43:32 PM AEST
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wow u are poetic tonite... great job i looove yer poems god ..... u r so talented kc.... i love this poem.... sets an interesting mood.... its reli good..... love it love it love it *reads it again*
thank ya fer sharin
jennie*....... *hug* |
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