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Truth's uprising
Contributed by
all_the_dead_roses
on
Wednesday, 13th July 2005 @ 12:46:40 AM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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you feel the earth
shaking profoundly
and you know all of the
children are sleeping soundly
your eyes wide awake
but your body limp
you see the streets filled
with whores and their pimps
your only survival
is to turn your head
pollution thick
civilization dead
your bullid into believing
this world is for you
but when you look around
you fear there is nothing to do
you sit alone
like the world is surprising
but you've been fooled
by truth's uprising
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Re: Truth's uprising
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by lil_angel on
Wednesday, 13th July 2005 @ 01:30:56 AM AEST
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| This is really good! just a peice of advice people steer away from poems that have (please commet) in the (about) u may get more commets if u dont ask for it but this is a great write |
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Re: Truth's uprising
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by Fionndruinne on
Wednesday, 13th July 2005 @ 02:30:22 AM AEST
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Interesting! I like the strong natural flow to this. You've a rather grim take on it all, but I won't say it's not pretty close to correct. Keep it up.
Andrew |
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