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my room
Contributed by
feathercut
on
Wednesday, 13th July 2005 @ 04:06:15 AM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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Darkness pulled me from my feet
and shook me upside down
i was indifferent
to the change
my face so close to the ground
I said " My luck had left years ago
so you can shake me untill tommorow
i have nothing left to hide
So he left me lying on the ground
and politely said
" goodnight "
the hours tiptoed through the room
without making a sound
i waited for the dawn to accidentally rise
an ash tray by my mothers face pictured
which with me lye
her eyes would change so many times
in my twisted mind
But when my eyes dripped
on her face
she had no reply
so i threw her glass face at a wall
and politely said
" goodbye"
my face hovered above
the toilet
for hours just to see
if i could possible lose my grip
and release the *****
i need to breathe
but no answer came
only a reflection that never changed
so i left the cold tile
back to the floor
of the room which i became
my precious love
she took the hungry hand
of an aimless lad
right in
and she raped the girl
i had kept warm
in my own skin
now they both lye
like bags of ice
indifferent to their stenched bodies
and than they begin
to dig again
to find
to find
nothing....
im still here
in feverous shake
waiting for the dawn
to accidentally wake...
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2005-07-13 04:06:15]
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Re: my room
(User Rating: 1 )
by RoxyGirl on
Thursday, 14th July 2005 @ 01:37:15 AM AEST
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Very good write very powerful
LOVE ALWAYS YOUR FRIEND
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