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I Died In This World
Contributed by
RpYoeAtrNy
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Wednesday, 13th July 2005 @ 07:32:04 AM in AEST
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Never had I thought that I'd be hear today
I would have never seen this coming
Though, my death was near, not far away
Deep down inside I knew I'd die in this place
This world of, descruction, of money and pay
Though, I really did wish that I would die peaceful
But I died with war all around me
I died, with sadness growing through my flesh
Died angered like the stormy waves a sea
In a world of crime I can't help but woner
"Is this they way that it really had to be?"
-Ryan F (13)
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2005-07-13 07:32:04]
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Re: I Died In This World
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by Cold_Blue_Eyes on
Sunday, 12th March 2006 @ 11:39:34 PM AEST
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| Wow. Great poem. It talks of serious issues and in a poetic way. I really appreciate your work. Good job. |
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