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Moon Catcher
Contributed by
frustratedwitch
on
Wednesday, 13th July 2005 @ 10:38:37 AM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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As I was seated on the floor,
He opened his mouth
And the moon leapt about.
I found myself filled
With inexplicable glee
Then the moon hurdled,
Jumped out to sea
So I ran and ran with
Him beside me.
But the moon had gone
Up the sky.
And so had he.
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2005-07-13 10:38:37]
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Re: Moon Catcher
(User Rating: 1 )
by Hiddendarkness1705 on
Tuesday, 29th August 2006 @ 03:29:12 PM AEST
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Coffee Cup was my favorite..I find with your other poems they are lacking the transitions..You have emotion, just are clearly showing it...
Keep writing though :) |
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