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lesson time doodles
Contributed by
glassicallyunsuperficial
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Wednesday, 13th July 2005 @ 11:13:12 AM in AEST
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I want to sleep
Daren't , due to the teacher's whip
as she claims might whip out anytime
at any eye-pointed crime
that we might commit
that old git
at her age
driving herself up the wall with seething rage
what's the point
were I not falling asleep during her class
I'd be dreaming till it last
Anyway, my mind won't be clear
Oh wait, she's looking over here............
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Re: lesson time doodles
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 13th July 2005 @ 12:20:26 PM AEST
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I found myself in this same situation at 8:30 in the morning during British Lit.
A delightful read. |
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Re: lesson time doodles
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by Arden on
Saturday, 16th July 2005 @ 11:14:58 AM AEST
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Cute poem.
Though I think it should have been under Humorous poetry or at least something.
Your rhyming was going up and down. No great word usage.
But it was still an enjoyable and understandable write.
4/5
Keep it up.
-Arden |
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