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A Rose
Contributed by
AliB
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Wednesday, 13th July 2005 @ 01:41:55 PM in AEST
Topic:
Haiku
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Prominent, pretty
pale pink, sweetly scented rose
Thorns of innocence
Copyright ©
AliB
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2005-07-13 13:41:55]
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Re: A Rose
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by MorningDove on
Wednesday, 13th July 2005 @ 03:54:18 PM AEST
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Perfectly structured and absolutely beautiful.
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Re: A Rose
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by shelby on
Wednesday, 13th July 2005 @ 04:14:33 PM AEST
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this is nice I dont do this type of thing well and you picked a beautiful flower for the topic
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Re: A Rose
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by Dawny on
Tuesday, 27th September 2005 @ 07:51:51 AM AEST
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Hi Ali
I dont understand haiku myself lol, but this is nice, perfectly describes the rose
Love Dawny xxx |
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Re: A Rose
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by Eternal_Dreamer on
Friday, 18th November 2005 @ 08:07:43 AM AEST
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WoW Ali this is absolutely awesome. The rose such a beautiful delicate thing. Very well structured and written very well.
The rose beautiful even with its thorns.
Well done. Keep penning.
*hugs*
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