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Damaged Hands
Contributed by
Boobiepeach
on
Wednesday, 13th July 2005 @ 03:11:16 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Shoulders move swiftly with you
Push and pull with hands so scarred
Feet are planted like roots in mud
Easily slipping through air
Sit so hunched on corner grip
Bend over with hands bruised
Pull and push with a gentle motion
Sit up then clasp your scream
Concentrate on pen you hold
Squeeze tight with burned hand
Lean in as if an answer find
The room wont spin and burn
Clutch my own with sweet pressure
Bleeding hand will sway with ease
Creeping to touch with nervousness
Move forward then retract, an accident
Cry in place and stare at feet
Shake slowly then look at sore hands
Catch you tears, thats all they will grasp
They used to hold so much
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Boobiepeach
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2005-07-13 15:11:16]
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Re: Damaged Hands
(User Rating: 1 )
by Dorkfish on
Wednesday, 13th July 2005 @ 05:06:00 PM AEST
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| That was very good, but I have a question....How did you post that poem with damaged hands? |
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Re: Damaged Hands
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by MorningDove on
Wednesday, 13th July 2005 @ 08:19:52 PM AEST
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I am kind of leaning towards Dorkfish' question. If you hands are not hurt then what is it an analogy for??????? If they are hurt, I hope they get better. You needed some kind of intro for us to work off us. They are either broken or burned or bruised. Which???
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