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Hold
Contributed by
Dri
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Wednesday, 13th July 2005 @ 07:08:55 PM in AEST
Topic:
FriendshipPoetry
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she blinks sleepily
windows to her soul
painted the chocolate of a decadent dessert-
how many times Ive felt the pleasure
of blonde running through my hands
a comfort, a prayer
those nicks on her wrists what lie did she feed you
to explain all those weak moments away?
blame what she will
but nothing warms me like truth off her lips
she feels safe laying it all bare on the ground
she lets me hold her and I let her cry
darkened car
flashes of red and neon
signs and signals
she shook and gasped air around pain
my arms around her shoulders as I sang along
with the radio
hed bled her again and I was right there
she called me again and it wasnt enough
I want to hold her close and keep her there
whisper I love you
and run my hand through that golden hair
what is a friendship without the embrace that keeps you near?
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Dri
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2005-07-13 19:08:55]
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Re: Hold
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 14th July 2005 @ 02:53:07 PM AEST
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You combine imagery and emotion so well in this write. Like looking at a painting and feeling like you are there.
Greatly written, i enjoy your writes. |
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