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I'm Not Coming Back
Contributed by
babytearschick
on
Wednesday, 13th July 2005 @ 11:39:31 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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Everythings right
And nothings wrong
When I look at your face
And Im in your arms
Later that night
I look up at the stars
And wonder which one
Could be ours
Than something happened
And I didnt know what to do
You said you loved me
And theres nothing to lose
But for some odd reason
I didnt believe you
And when you looked in my eyes
It wasnt really you
Later that night
I got a call
You said you got stoned
Down at the mall
You told me your sorry
And you wont do it again
Yet I know the stories
And you will do it again
So now I gotta let you go
Now matter how much I dont want to
I know its for the best
And that I have to
So now I say goodbye
And I look in your eyes
And I see what has fallen
Its the stars in the sky
Stars are falling
In the sky
Faster and faster they fall
As I fade away into where I lay
Im gone for good
And theres no coming back
No matter how much you beg
Im not coming back
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2005-07-13 23:39:31]
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Re: I'm Not Coming Back
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by RoxyGirl on
Thursday, 14th July 2005 @ 12:44:27 AM AEST
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I liked your poem It was well writen. I hope you keep writing And would like to hear more
ALWAYS YOUR FRIEND
ROXYGIRL |
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Re: I'm Not Coming Back
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by pUnKa_RaCh on
Thursday, 14th July 2005 @ 02:44:25 AM AEST
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Aw i can relate to your sadness.
The emotion was very real in this poem, and I also fell in love with a stoner, and yeah it wasnt pretty. So i can really understand your pain and how much it does hurt to say goodbye and walk away.
Well done, thank you for sharing.
Hope to you dear poet. |
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