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Water-Fall
Contributed by
crow
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Thursday, 14th July 2005 @ 01:19:51 AM in AEST
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MiscPoems
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All around the waterfall flowers, hues, beautiful colored arch. Misted canopy paints it`s silver motionless beauty lies in weep.
Ageless symptoms struck her down a Lover`s surrender had found her once. Naked beauty washed in tears silent upon the bed of stone.
See her wounds have robbed her breath, ashes scattered before us.
Vivid colors a fragile thing smallest creatures mourn.
Here they bow emerald carpet eyes tell you her fate.
But one chance is all she asked.... purity in love takes her.
Here at the Water-Fall no one visits a timeless beauty waits.
Canopies of silver vivid colors tears still flow from the bed of stone gently to the water`s edge...
One love had been allowed...
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2005-07-14 01:19:51] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Water-Fall
(User Rating: 1 ) by MorningDove on
Thursday, 14th July 2005 @ 01:37:57 AM AEST (User
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Your imagery is amazing.
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Re: Water-Fall
(User Rating: 1 ) by NoSaint on
Friday, 15th July 2005 @ 11:58:27 AM AEST (User
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magical write
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