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Brick
Contributed by
billy_corgan
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Thursday, 14th July 2005 @ 05:56:58 PM in AEST
Topic:
abstract
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rough edged; bumped like a gravel road.
further in I feel the smooth cool lines
of mortar and clay. my fingers slip
and stumble into the dark holes.
after traversing the holes, I re-enter the
gravelly desert. scratching my feet with anvil
hands. here my journey ends as it began.
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2005-07-14 17:56:58]
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Re: Brick
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by remote on
Wednesday, 14th September 2005 @ 12:15:59 PM AEST
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| Interesting how you have percieved and represented a brick. |
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Re: Brick
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by silver_runaway on
Wednesday, 15th March 2006 @ 11:03:21 AM AEST
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Definately original, I like it- keep it up
*laura* |
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Re: Brick
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by devil_child on
Saturday, 25th March 2006 @ 05:34:09 AM AEST
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| wow, it really is about a brick.....um....nice descriptions..... |
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